The third reader to finish it got it, and enjoyed it.
They’ve given me their copy back, for me to read through their notes and corrections, and I had a chat to them on Sunday about what they thought:
Too many dot, dot, dot’s.
Takes a little while to get going.
Likes the repetition.
Likes Frank, and his relationship with Ben.
And likes that Lamb knew…
So I just have to finish typing up the corrections, and then I can move onto trying to get it published.